Tuesday, March 17, 2020

Impede and Impinge

Impede and Impinge Impede and Impinge Impede and Impinge By Maeve Maddox A reader questions the use of the preposition on after impede in a newspaper headline: I don’t think â€Å"on† is needed or correct [in this headline]: â€Å"Washington’s weeklong power outage impeding on Thanksgiving.† I’d love to hear your thoughts. The reader is correct. Impede does not take a preposition. Here are examples of correct usage: Flamingo Road  construction will impede  traffic through 2016 Natural selection, key to evolution, also  can impede  formation of new species. Do emotions  impede  logic or do emotions contribute to being rational? Five Negative Thoughts that  Impede  Weight Loss In each example, impede is a transitive verb followed by a direct object. Impede combines the Latin negative prefix im- with the Latin word for foot. The meaning of Latin impedire is â€Å"to shackle the feet.† The English transitive verb impede means, â€Å"to retard in progress or action by putting obstacles in the way; to obstruct; to hinder; to stand in the way of.† The person who wrote â€Å"Washington’s weeklong power outage impeding on Thanksgiving† may have been reaching for impinging. Latin impingere means â€Å"to push, strike, drive [something] at or into something else. A common meaning of the English verb impinge is â€Å"to encroach or infringe on or upon.† When that’s the meaning, impinge is followed by the preposition on (or upon): But at what point does  my  freedom to act  impinge on  your freedom? I don’t care what they do in their private lives just as long as they  dont impinge on my rights.   Is it acceptable to  impinge on  certain civil liberties for  the sake of national security? Is it possible to set up quiet areas without  impinging on playground  space? Dido Sued for Impinging on an Astronaut’s Persona The noise from next door was impinging upon my  concentration. Want to improve your English in five minutes a day? Get a subscription and start receiving our writing tips and exercises daily! Keep learning! Browse the Expressions category, check our popular posts, or choose a related post below:Apply to, Apply for, and Apply with"Owing to" vs "Due to"3 Types of Essays Are Models for Professional Writing Forms

Sunday, March 1, 2020

Why You Don’t Have to Look Good on Your Resume

Why You Don’t Have to Look Good on Your Resume True or false? â€Å"A resume is supposed to make you look good.† Answer:   FALSE Well, I’ll concede, it’s only partially false.   Although you want your resume to look good and to portray your job history and accomplishments in a clear and impressive manner, it’s important not to overdo your attempts to impress your reader. The misconception that a resume is supposed to make you look good can lead to mischaracterization of job duties, inflation of accomplishments, and flowery, high-falutin language.   None of those things belong on a resume!   Stick to the truth instead. Example #1:   A client who was applying for development jobs wrote in a bullet that she â€Å"[a]ssisted in organizing† a conference.   Since I do not like to see the word â€Å"assist† on a resume (see Words to Delete from Your Resume), I asked her what exactly she did to assist.   It turns out she set up tables and provided registration assistance on the day of the conference, but had no involvement in the planning or organization of the event.   We changed the verb in her bullet to â€Å"Staffed† – a much more accurate description of what this applicant did. Example #2:   A client stated that she â€Å"[p]articipated in† company meetings.   In actuality, she had organized materials for the meetings and attended them.   We made her language more specific, thus accurately reflecting her activities. Why not stretch the truth just a little? First of all, I never condone lying about anything and always support acting with integrity.   Additionally, if your resume gets you an interview, you could be asked questions about absolutely anything you’ve written.   You don’t want to get caught in even the tiniest lie. I’m glad I asked my clients questions about their bullets before an interviewer did.   The first client was applying to jobs where she could easily be called upon to organize a conference; if she submitted a resume that overstated her experience in conference organization, it could lead to an embarrassing and deal-killing interview moment.   Similarly, the second client was applying to jobs that entailed numerous meetings, and familiarity with meeting protocol was required.   It was dangerous for him as well to represent his experience inaccurately. When you are creating resume bullet points, and even when you are writing your Summary of Qualifications, make sure to report your activities, qualifications and accomplishments accurately.   Without using impressive or flowery language, you can succeed in writing a resume that makes you look good by clearly and truthfully conveying your accomplishments. As in so many other things, honesty on your resume is the best policy.   Think of the most impressive thing you can truthfully report and let it speak for itself.   Follow this advice and you’ll look good without even trying. Need resume help?   Contact The Essay Expert for a free 15 minute consultation. 🙂 Log in to Reply Paul Novak says: September 22, 2010 at 3:28 pm I think you may have described the most popular practices used in creating online business profiles. Until I started working online I had no idea there were so many assistant and associate positions;) Log in to Reply The Essay Expert says: September 22, 2010 at 4:39 pm Inflation and exaggeration are rampant indeed, in multiple areas of business. Although sometimes intentional, I think many of the overstatements come from a lack of rigor or willingness to be exact with language. Using a writing coach helps! Log in to Reply Jarom says: September 22, 2010 at 8:49 pm Thanks for pointing these posts out to me Brenda! Its awesome to see that youre getting some great comments and feedback. Log in to Reply Oz says: September 23, 2010 at 5:03 pm Brenda, this is very good advice. I took a resume class in college that taught me a lot about how to properly write a resume. Your tips are spot on. I recently wrote a blog entry, highlighting a similar topic from Salary.com about what not to put on a resume: https://garretts-attic.net/blog/2010/09/10-things-to-never-put-on-a-resume/ Log in to Reply The Essay Expert says: September 23, 2010 at 5:37 pm To clarify Jaroms remark, the multiple comments on this blog were generated largely by membership and participation in the Blog Zone group on LinkedIn. If any bloggers are reading, I recommend you join! Log in to Reply The Essay Expert says: September 23, 2010 at 5:38 pm Thanks for the affirmation Oz! I wrote this because multiple examples were coming up in my work, and I think many people are unaware that they are even doing it! Log in to Reply Jason Bahamundi says: September 24, 2010 at 6:48 am Brenda This is a great article. As an person who is unemployed and is sending out resumes I often wonder two things: 1- What would make me stand out more to the hiring manager and should I be more creative with it? The answer has always been no because if you are constantly changing information on your resume that is not true you could end up getting caught as you point out and trying to remember what you put on resume #1 versus resume #100 would be almost impossible 2- What are others putting on their resume and why havent I gotten a call since I think I am a perfect fit? Well since your article talks about building up ones accomplishments, that might just be the case here. By being patient maybe those that have embelished their resume will get uncovered and I WILL eventually get that call. Thank you for this post. Log in to Reply The Essay Expert says: September 24, 2010 at 8:13 am Youre welcome Jason. It might be that you are not being specific enough on your resume. Specificity helps your accomplishments stand out. Make sure you have items on the resume that do not sound like a job description! If youd like me to take a look I can give you a free 15 minute assessment. See my article published in New Grad Life, Back to the Future Log in to Reply